December 30th, 2008, 11:00 pm

There's Something Wrong 8

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December 30th, 2008, 3:40 pm

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March 18th, 2009, 4:07 am

Where is Max/Ethan in that first panel? Is he wearing shades and sitting in a recliner inside, next to the computer?

Also, it's really unclear how exactly he knocks the computer off the table. You don't even show the edge of that table in panel 5. And the motion lines on the computer in panel 6? Really awkward. When it comes to motion lines, less is more.

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