December 27th, 2008, 10:32 am

There's Something Wrong 6

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December 27th, 2008, 10:37 am

Spot the grievous anatomy error, win a prize!

WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT??? WHO KNOWS???

September 26th, 2017, 5:52 am

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December 30th, 2008, 11:28 pm

And that ladies and gentlemen is the truth behind chapel hill. (the last panel)

January 5th, 2009, 2:28 pm

Um, sure? I don't care either way, and you're pretty bad at trolling, so.

March 18th, 2009, 3:59 am

Panel 1: A blanket draped over him would help show that he's in bed, not just standing up in front of a rectangle.

Panel 2: The dialogue is way cramped. Why not move Ethan/Max a bit more left, leaving space for those word balloons?

Panel 3: Is that supposed to be the interior of a bus? You would do well to add some more to it. The back of the driver's seat, perhaps? Some other people? And what's up with his expression?

Panel 4-6: I like the timing and close ups.

Panel 7: Is that supposed to be the bus driving out of the frame? You should really look at a photo reference or something.

March 18th, 2009, 4:01 am

Oh, and the grievous anatomy error is that his thumb is on the wrong side when he's gripping the bar.

March 18th, 2009, 7:31 pm

THANKS WE FORGOT

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